Dear group,
My draft talks about the story of Biti Rose Nasoni who is a thrifty-nine years old women farmer in the southern African nation of Malawi, on page 42-45. I have wrote how the photograph relates with the text. I think I did described the caption and the detailed imagery well but explaining the moment when it was taken was a little bit difficult because I know that it sends a message (which I explained) but I think it sends a stronger and more powerful message. Let me know what I can improve and/or what is wrong. I'll take any advices and comments.
My draft talks about the story of Biti Rose Nasoni who is a thrifty-nine years old women farmer in the southern African nation of Malawi, on page 42-45. I have wrote how the photograph relates with the text. I think I did described the caption and the detailed imagery well but explaining the moment when it was taken was a little bit difficult because I know that it sends a message (which I explained) but I think it sends a stronger and more powerful message. Let me know what I can improve and/or what is wrong. I'll take any advices and comments.
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