9/12/17
PW: How do you feel about your draft? What would you ideally like out of this workshop?
I honestly feel ok about it, I do need help concerning my introduction and first paragraph because I have a lot of information but I just don't know where to place them. I just need like a better plan than the two plans that I have already made, even thought they aren't completely complete. I would ideally like obviously a good grade but also maybe at the end make my mother read this essay because I would like to make her happy but also make her understand that I understand what we both went through. 

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